Thursday, 30 July 2015

Treasure ianded

 Land I see, Pirates. They all landed on treasure island and dug and dug. But it was a trick. DHa,ha, ha laughed the captain Black Patch. I tricked all you pirates. Cook made lots of food. He made some apple pie and chicken rolls and chocolate cake. Three cheers for cook.


  1. Go Jarreka,
    I'm impressed that you have used some of your own words to tell the story. You have so much detail in your picture as well.

    Mrs Krausse

  2. yay Jarreka well done writing a long story . I love your story about pirates. keep on going you nearly got it